More Love, More Power - a song translation

I am very impressed by one song - More Love, More Power. I have listened it performed by Michael W. Smith and also in chill out compilations Chill Out Celebration and Chill Out XPerience, which I don't know who perform them. I have decided to translate it in Bulgarian, because the lyrics look simple and have great impact. However it apeared not so easy task, because words in English and Bulgarian generally have different length. Therefore I have made several translations.

The difficulti comes from that I want to accent on "More of you in my life", which becomes very long in Bulgarian and doesn't match the melody, but if I change it little the meaning changes too which I don't like.

Here is a video:
http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=klq3HkSfx-s

English lyrics are here:
http://paucku.com/bg/node/59

Bulgarian lyrics are here:
http://paucku.com/bg/node/60

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